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I hear the song of the wolf crying at night
I listen to the whines of puppies by thier mothers,
the gale wind speaking, the thrushing of water,
everything around me speaks of the wild
those warm memories burned into my still beating heart.
I find myself as I look into their eyes and see my reflection.
This is a draft.

I had something great planned for the title "Wolf's Breath". and this is a mere outline and feels rather vague to me. I found pieces of it littered inside my mind. The Revision will be a 7 stanza ballade when I can pounce my muse and keep it around long enough.
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WolfSong-of-Dragon Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool :D
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XxCheapShotxX Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Beautiful! It reminds me of a poem I heard a long time ago, but I cant remember how it went. I guess that's not very helpful, but yes, very nice :)
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lakiya Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012   Writer
Why thank you- I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've always intended to continue this poem as a series but its difficult to meet the high expectations I put on myself. Perhaps I shall once day.
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glow-bats Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Very beautiful poem! I really like it. ^^
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lakiya Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012   Writer
Aww..thank you very much *wags his tail*
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everfaraway Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*nuzzle* It speaks of pack Lakiya. I would like to have it in the pack's gallery if you'd allow it.
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lakiya Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012   Writer
Of course *noses* I would be honored. One day I wish to continue that story once inspiration finds me again.
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everfaraway Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And when you do ever wolf will read it
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R-o-c-k-h-e-a-r-t Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see potential in this, and if you actually tried to, I'd like to see this made as an actual story in poem form because THAT would be amazing. This is a great first draft :P
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lakiya Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012   Writer
I have been wanting to write something like this for a very long time. It's been slowly coming together as I wish it to be perfect as I can make it.
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